Hi ya! I think you mostly nailed the last panel. Maybe see if you could bring the person (you!) a bit closer, cropped tighter, like a typical mugshot (heads and shoulders, not much more below). At this stage, I'm not as clear about panels 1 and 2. Maybe the sketched version will reveal more. Still, I remember your concept and it was pretty funny. So, please, don't look track of your narrative and visual priorities, and remember that your photo ref is just that, "reference," not the absolute final visual solution -- you adapt it to your final needs. Go for it, Kelsey!
Hi ya! I think you mostly nailed the last panel. Maybe see if you could bring the person (you!) a bit closer, cropped tighter, like a typical mugshot (heads and shoulders, not much more below). At this stage, I'm not as clear about panels 1 and 2. Maybe the sketched version will reveal more. Still, I remember your concept and it was pretty funny. So, please, don't look track of your narrative and visual priorities, and remember that your photo ref is just that, "reference," not the absolute final visual solution -- you adapt it to your final needs. Go for it, Kelsey!
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